Not bad for being a first-timer.
However, background color as brown is a little... dull&boring?
The picture is simple-ly edit-ed.
Learn from critisizes!(:

don't use baby pink boxes on a brown background (: find other codes that are more suitable? nice try though

i think you could like, brighten the picture a lil?

very pretty for a first timer

not badd for a first skin

The picture is nice, but pretty wordy. Maybe add another picture to maintain balance (: You could also play around with the colours in the CSS a lot more, and don't use common codes. ^^

PRETTY FOR FIRST. I BET YOU WILL DO MUCH BETTER FOR THE SKINS AHEAD.