It can be improve. The dashed, the fonts and all that

its quite nice but it is not for me..GOod attempt though

Like everyone else has mentioned,
the dashes.
Very much distracting. :X

I like the simplicity of it tho!
(:

i dont like the dashed thingys,
but i love the simplicity! [:

I think the stripes are quite distracting.. but it's quite daring of you to submit such a simple skin =)

i like how you've done the borders, very creative! I don't think there's anything wrong with 'jagged edges', but i agree with the font part. you should've used something cursive? good effort (:

A cursive font would be better.

Like the concept but i don't think jagged edges would go with flowers ( which gives smooth feelings :/ )

Ah well, overall not bad still